2018 Sanford Goldstein
International Tanka Contest Winners
Jessica Malone Latham and Neal Whitman,
Judges
Thank you to Jessica Malone Latham and Neal Whitman for their hard work in
judging this year’s contest. Also, thank you to Kenneth Slaughter for shuffling
the poems and creating a master list for the judges to work with without any
names attached. And a big thank you to everyone who entered for your dedication
in making this contest a success. We had 81 participants from nine countries:
Australia, Canada, India, Israel, Japan, New Zealand, Sri Lanka, the United
Kingdom, and the United States, for a total of 476 entries. Please enjoy the
judges’ report and the winning selections.
—Susan Burch, TSA Contest Coordinator
Judges’ Report
Both of us love reading, writing, and examining tanka, so, though a daunting
task, judging this tanka contest was a labor of love. From the start, we found
common ground in our shared commitment to read, reread, and rereread, and to
recite tanka out loud . . . each of us at home behind closed doors,
eager hearts, and open windows. We agreed that seeing each tanka on the page
and hearing its sound was important to both of us. Two sets of eyes. Two sets
of ears. While we admired and noted structure, syntax, and lyricism, we also
allowed the poem to speak to us deeply and individually, to really listen to
the story within each word. That is why it is said that no two people read the
same poem!
We started by independently
choosing thirty tanka and found it remarkable that there was an overlap of five
tanka on our two lists. Our aim for the next round was to create one list of thirty
tanka, but, since the overlap was an odd number, we each chose thirteen poems
from the other judge’s list, thus making a list of thirty-one tanka.
Again, we were committed to read,
hear, see, feel, and recite. Keeping the original selection of five tanka, the
next round was for each judge to choose two tanka from the list of thirteen
tanka that the other judge had selected from each other’s list. With this set
of nine tanka, we talked on the telephone to share our personal experiences and
collaborative interpretation of each poem before the last stage of voting.
Then, via email, we each assigned nine
points to our “top” choice down to one point for “bottom” choice. What a challenge!
All nine tanka felt like winners. To all those who submitted tanka we
acknowledge and believe that every one of you submitted a “winning” tanka, in
that you sent what you believed was worthy of a prize. Both judges know the
feeling of not receiving a placement this time around. Still, the two of us
join hands with every one of you that we, the tanka poets of the world, are
continuing to increase our awareness, expand our compassion, heal our wounds,
and express ourselves. With that said, the winners, the honorable mentions, and
each poet who submitted touched a place in our hearts and in the poetry
community. With sincerest gratitude, we thank you for allowing us to read,
appreciate, interpret, and judge your art. Heartfelt congratulations to the winners,
and to all!
—Jessica Malone Latham and Neal Whitman
First Place ($100)
the ocean
was in a rage last night
but today,
these peace offerings
of blue mussels and kelp
Debbie
Strange
Winnipeg, Manitoba
The word “rage” has a long, storied history in literature. It is a universal
emotion and, for sure, people have long experienced the rage of the ocean. How
excellent we thought was its use in line two, rather than using a word such as “storm.”
We admired the use of a simple comma at the end of line three to give the
reader a short pause to allow a moment to ponder, “What’s next?” Ah, there is a
resolution to the last night. Today? A peace offering to which we felt an “aah”
moment. How welcome is the bounty. The ocean offers an infinity of treasures.
We found the blue mussels and kelp to be a delightful choice made by this poet.
We have already mentioned reciting tanka aloud to take in their sound. You
might not choose to read out loud all nine of the awarded tanka, but this one,
in particular, lends itself to deeper appreciation with its pivot at the end of
line three. You might experience tranquility with lines four and five. We did.
Second Place ($50)
a gift
within a gift
poppies
holding the silence
in the shape of petals
Kathy
Kituai
Canberra, Australia
We allowed ourselves to really imagine the openness of poppies, their petals
spilling into sky for sunshine or rain to fill them. Poppies hold silence and,
in the shape of petals, so do our hands, so do our hearts. To us, this poet
brought out the magic in the ordinary, the hallelujah moment, reverence, and
gratitude all said in the silence of poppies—were they left alone in a field to
carry out their beauty, or plucked and placed into a vase as an apology or
token of sympathy? We were left with enough answers, enough questions, and
enough room to interpret what we felt the poet’s message was. In our opinion,
that is the simple magic of this poem.
Third Place ($25)
no resolutions
this New Year’s Day
I will make
changes to my life
in the early days of spring
Alison
Williams
Southampton, United
Kingdom
What initially stood out in this poem was the risk this poet took by selecting
the holiday, New Year’s Day. This dark day in January, when the world is cold
and resting [in the Northern hemisphere], has birthed into a time when we are
told to make our intentions and changes, hopes and dreams. Instead, this poet,
intuitive and trusting, settles into the dark like her fellow crocus beneath
the snow. This poet tucks in deep as the bear whose heart slowly beats, and
waits, rests, surrenders . . . survives. This poet then states “I
will make / changes to my life / in the early days of spring,” revealing a
sense of trust and humility in the slow and steady pace of life. It is in those
days when sunlight returns, when things begin to stir, when the wishes and
dreams that were given the chance to simmer, can now shoot forth as thousands
of blossoms. In our eyes, this poem carries a delicate balance of dark and
light, and ultimately, a sense of hope.
Honorable Mentions (not ranked)
in and out
of waves, a gentle motion
whispers:
how far do I drop
to feel sand?
Louis
Osofsky
Sacramento, California
As humans on earth, we experience the rise and fall of life, the gentle sway of
waves, and subtle secrets that come and go, as do all creatures. This poem
brought to mind the humility and strength, tenderness and mercy we experience
in life. With waves, we lift and lower, letting water carry us. When we try
instead, fighting against the flow, we taste the bitterness of a losing battle.
If the intention of this poem is merely a surfer wondering when a wave will
bring him or her to shore, it is beautifully written, but we believe this poet
has a larger message for us all. In a few lines, the poet has successfully
portrayed the universality of waves within each of us, and ultimately, no
matter how far we drop, we can trust that we will eventually be caught by sand.
polishing
the apple on my jeans
I know
my mother-in-law
still has something to say
Christine
L. Villa
North Highlands, California
As sons and daughters, fathers and mothers, and each of us who navigate the
road of family, this poem is filled with perfect imagery—the fallen apple. The
apple is an archetypal image for fairy tales such as Snow White and told in
religion tales like the apple of Adam and Eve. The apple carries a plethora of
childhood memories: apple pies, bobbing for apples, worms hidden deep, star
seeds, health, sweetness, bitterness, and so on. Even more, the poet mentions polishing
off the dirt to make the apple shine, and the absence of mother-in-law’s words.
What more would she say? What is she saying in the unsaid? We were struck by
the ease of how the poem read and the depth of its story. This made our minds
swirl with perspective and intrigue, something well done by this poet.
if only
I’d read the novel
my mother
wanted to share with me
the bitter taste of rue
Sheila
Sondik
Bellingham, Washington
We’ve all had one of those “if only” moments, yes? As a verb, “rue” means to
regret what had been done by commission or omission, but, as a noun, it is an
evergreen with bitter, strongly scented leaves. This tanka poet spoke from the
heart to the hearts of both judges. The feeling of remorse is conveyed by the
one specific example in a family history that prompts the reader to wonder how
much more there is to it. All this in a well-constructed tanka that teaches us
the power of a single, well-chosen word to make all the difference. With this
tanka, we were also reminded that, while you might find the words “The End” at
the end of a novel, a poem welcomes the reader to continue the story. We found
this tanka a demonstration of that principle.
I sit for hours
legs dangling over the dock
wondering who I am
the lake reflects
ten thousand moons
Michael
Lester
Los Angeles, California
While each line in this poem carried images that resonated strongly with us, we
were particularly drawn to examining the last three lines. How many moons wax
and wane in our lifetimes? And how many nights has this moon filled this lake
with its light? How many of our ancestors have come to water to pray, kneel,
bow, or dangle one’s legs, bodies pouring over to the mysteries of our
expansive universe? We are led to believe the subject in this poem is young, perhaps
at summer camp asking “who am I.” But whether we are young or old, with beginner’s
mind or set in our ways, we all sense the universal message that we are left at
some point with limp limbs, rippled waters, and the changing moonlight, eager
to receive answers from something bigger than us.
on this night
of our awareness,
the aurora
brushes an ensō
across lake and sky
Debbie
Strange
Winnipeg, Manitoba
This tanka offered a wonder visual image of sky artistry in the shape of a the
Zen form of the brush-stroked circle known as an ensō. The circle, of course,
has been a time-immemorial symbol of life with no beginning and no end. Reading
this tanka did, in fact, provide both judges a moment of awareness. The poet
asks us to imagine a transition from night to the first light of dawn when
anything is possible. There is magic in the transcendence gifted by this tanka.
wheat fields
tousled by fingers
of wind
I tuck a strand of hair
behind your ear
Debbie
Strange
Winnipeg, Manitoba
This tanka brought out the romance of life expressed in gentle moments, and oh
how gently we are brought into this scene. In this poem, love is in wind and
wheat, love is expressed by tucking hair with hands. While we sat in the
presence of this poem, it enabled each of us to feel this sacred moment of
love, and to reflect on our symbols of affection and tenderness. For us, we
ultimately fell into a moment of appreciation and quietude.
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Neal Whitman, in transition into retirement, took up the writing of
general poetry in 2005, haiku in 2008, and tanka in 2011. In contests sponsored
by Diogen Pro Kultura Magazin in Bosnia-Herzegovina,
his tanka won the summer 2013 1st prize and spring 2014 2nd prize, as well as the
2013 Autumn Best Tanka Pentaptych. In addition, his tanka won the United Haiku and
Tanka Society’s 2014 “Pen the Painting” award and 2015 1st honorable mention in
the Fleeting Words Tanka Competition. Neal is now vice president of the UHTS. He
is haiku editor for Pulse: Voices from the
Heart of Medicine and on the editorial board of Revisita: Magazine of Romanian-Japanese Relationship. In 2015, he cojudged
the Haiku Society of America’s Kanterman Merit Book Awards.
Jessica Malone Latham, M.A., is the author of Cricket Song: Haiku and Short Poems from a Mother’s Heart (Red Moon
Press) and the chapbooks Clouds of Light
(wooden nickel press) and All this Bowing
(Buddha Baby Press). Her tanka, haiku, and related forms have appeared in dozens
of journals and anthologies, and she has received several awards. As a mother of
two boys, Jessica teaches local seminars to new mothers about the importance of
writing their way through motherhood. In addition to writing poetry of all forms,
her prose has been featured on NPR’s local station, in Brain, Child, Literary Mama, Mamalode, Mothering, SpeakMom, and was featured in Tiny Buddha’s 365 Tiny Love Challenges (HarperOne).
Most recently, Jessica’s poetry has been featured in the “Seasons of Haiku” path
at Holden Arboretum in Ohio, and on Mann Library’s Daily Haiku website. To see more
of Jessica’s work, to purchase her collections, or consider taking one of
her poetry courses, visit her website at www.jessicalatham.com.
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